Show of hands, “Do you find selling a character in an erotic story distasteful?”
My current erotic novel, “Crashing a Swinger’s Pajama Party” involves a couple who accidentally invite themselves to a New Year’s Eve Pajama Party being held by a couple of swingers, who live down the street. This is the Cliff’s Notes version, so you’ll have to use your imagination to fill in the holes.
This novel size erotic story will end up being about 65,000 – 70,000 words and available on all types of electronic eReaders such as cell phones (Android & iPhone), iPad, tablet, Kindle, Nook, PC, and Mac.
A married couple attends a New Year’s Party with work friends that was a complete snooze fest. Coming home, they notice cars parked everywhere around the home that was a couple of houses down the street.
Picture Mr. and Mrs. Straight Couple, professional, suit and fashionable dress, married ten years, still happy but with some rough edges developing as boredom sinks in.
Naively, they assume that this is just a normal New Year’s Eve party, and they decide to crash it. They had met the couple who live there at neighborhood functions and barely knew them. Apparently, the party was a lot more fun than the one they just left so they ring the bell.
Possibly, I should throw in the fact that this story was based on a true event from one of our annual New Year’s Eve Swingers Pajama Parties! LOL For more on the party, click the link for the back story.
Walking in they realize they are in the midst of a full-blown orgy with over 100 nude/semi-nude people doing the nasty or watching!
I don’t have space to share all of the salacious details but Mrs. Straight Wife (Samantha) falls in love with the couples decadent lifestyle and ends up moving in with the swingers down the street to try and make up for lost time.
We quickly learn that Samantha burns every candle at both ends and is more than willing to try anything, the more extreme, the better. Gangbangs quickly become her go-to solution for every problem.
Here comes the problem:
Keep in mind that in the actual story, it took 60,000 words to get to this point in the soon to be published story so there is a whole lot that I’ve glossed over. Just assume that Samantha has been ridden hard and put up wet, as we say down home.
Samantha tags along with our swinger couple and another unicorn to a big house party. If you don’t know “house party” is an acronym for swinger’s party. You’ll have to Google for the definition of unicorn if you don’t know what that means to swingers.
At the party, they meet a German couple with limited English language skills who are shooting a Goo Girls movie except with English speaking actors and actresses. They are hoping if the participants speak English then the movie will be more popular than the German versions.
“Goo Girls” refers to a combination of gangbang and bukkake, where a small group of girls takes on a large group of guys. The object is normally to finish on the faces of the girls, hence the name goo girls as they are covered in jizz.
Our ex-straight wife Samantha finds that she’s in love for sure now. The idea of being gangbanged by a roomful of guys, who for the most part finish on her face, pushes all her buttons and she’s as happy as a pig in slop.
The German couple, with their limited grasp of English, ask Foxy (wife of Foxy and Larry) if they can “Buy” Samantha and use her to make movies for six months. Foxy laughingly offers Samantha for a purchase price of $10,000. When they quickly accept, Foxy realizes that she’s “Sold” the new girl far too cheaply.
Finally Here’s The Question?
I mentioned to a fellow female writer of erotica that my characters (Foxy & Larry) in the story were fixing to sell one of their girls to a Goo Girls movie producer. She felt that it was offensive for me to sell a character to a company making dirty movies.
What do you think? Personally, it never struck me as offensive but I have a warped sense of humor and as we live the world I write about, it didn’t strike me as wrong, maybe a little sick but not particularly wrong.
In the Lifestyle, as strange as it may seem, women hold all the power in a majority of the relationships. We are free to seek out and find like-minded couples for everything from straight sex to watching prostitutes pee (thanks Donald for that idea).
So it didn’t seem all that strange for Foxy and Larry to sell Samantha to a movie producer. For one, this is the cumulation of Samantha’s fantasies as she will have a continuous supply of cream for her face and abuse of her body.
As a “good girl,” her conscious will be clear as she will now be property and have to do as she’s told. Similar to people who like to be tied up and helpless, Samantha’s reputation will be unsoiled.
So what do you think? Am I a sick pervert who exploits women or just allows them to break their chains and do the things that are hidden in the dark corners of their mind?
This story should be out in a few weeks and is being produced in conjunction with a story written by a fellow writer, Lisabet Sarai. If you are interested in this novel-sized story of debauchery, follow my website for updates.
Larry Archer writes HEA stories about swingers, voyeurs, cuckolds, and Hotwives. The stories always include explicit sex for men and women on every page.
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