Show of hands, “Do you find selling a character in an erotic story distasteful?”
My current erotic novel, “Crashing a Swinger’s Pajama Party” involves a couple who accidentally invite themselves to a New Year’s Eve Pajama Party being held by a couple of swingers, who live down the street. This is the Cliff’s Notes version, so you’ll have to use your imagination to fill in the holes.
This novel size erotic story will end up being about 65,000 – 70,000 words and available on all types of electronic eReaders such as cell phones (Android & iPhone), iPad, tablet, Kindle, Nook, PC, and Mac.
A married couple attends a New Year’s Party with work friends that was a complete snooze fest. Coming home, they notice cars parked everywhere around the home that was a couple of houses down the street.
Picture Mr. and Mrs. Straight Couple, professional, suit and fashionable dress, married ten years, still happy but with some rough edges developing as boredom sinks in.
Naively, they assume that this is just a normal New Year’s Eve party, and they decide to crash it. They had met the couple who live there at neighborhood functions and barely knew them. Apparently, the party was a lot more fun than the one they just left so they ring the bell.
Possibly, I should throw in the fact that this story was based on a true event from one of our annual New Year’s Eve Swingers Pajama Parties! LOL For more on the party, click the link for the back story.
Walking in they realize they are in the midst of a full-blown orgy with over 100 nude/semi-nude people doing the nasty or watching!
I don’t have space to share all of the salacious details but Mrs. Straight Wife (Samantha) falls in love with the couples decadent lifestyle and ends up moving in with the swingers down the street to try and make up for lost time.
We quickly learn that Samantha burns every candle at both ends and is more than willing to try anything, the more extreme, the better. Gangbangs quickly become her go-to solution for every problem.
Here comes the problem:
Keep in mind that in the actual story, it took 60,000 words to get to this point in the soon to be published story so there is a whole lot that I’ve glossed over. Just assume that Samantha has been ridden hard and put up wet, as we say down home.
Samantha tags along with our swinger couple and another unicorn to a big house party. If you don’t know “house party” is an acronym for swinger’s party. You’ll have to Google for the definition of unicorn if you don’t know what that means to swingers.
At the party, they meet a German couple with limited English language skills who are shooting a Goo Girls movie except with English speaking actors and actresses. They are hoping if the participants speak English then the movie will be more popular than the German versions.
“Goo Girls” refers to a combination of gangbang and bukkake, where a small group of girls takes on a large group of guys. The object is normally to finish on the faces of the girls, hence the name goo girls as they are covered in jizz.
Our ex-straight wife Samantha finds that she’s in love for sure now. The idea of being gangbanged by a roomful of guys, who for the most part finish on her face, pushes all her buttons and she’s as happy as a pig in slop.
The German couple, with their limited grasp of English, ask Foxy (wife of Foxy and Larry) if they can “Buy” Samantha and use her to make movies for six months. Foxy laughingly offers Samantha for a purchase price of $10,000. When they quickly accept, Foxy realizes that she’s “Sold” the new girl far too cheaply.
Finally Here’s The Question?
I mentioned to a fellow female writer of erotica that my characters (Foxy & Larry) in the story were fixing to sell one of their girls to a Goo Girls movie producer. She felt that it was offensive for me to sell a character to a company making dirty movies.
What do you think? Personally, it never struck me as offensive but I have a warped sense of humor and as we live the world I write about, it didn’t strike me as wrong, maybe a little sick but not particularly wrong.
In the Lifestyle, as strange as it may seem, women hold all the power in a majority of the relationships. We are free to seek out and find like-minded couples for everything from straight sex to watching prostitutes pee (thanks Donald for that idea).
So it didn’t seem all that strange for Foxy and Larry to sell Samantha to a movie producer. For one, this is the cumulation of Samantha’s fantasies as she will have a continuous supply of cream for her face and abuse of her body.
As a “good girl,” her conscious will be clear as she will now be property and have to do as she’s told. Similar to people who like to be tied up and helpless, Samantha’s reputation will be unsoiled.
So what do you think? Am I a sick pervert who exploits women or just allows them to break their chains and do the things that are hidden in the dark corners of their mind?
This story should be out in a few weeks and is being produced in conjunction with a story written by a fellow writer, Lisabet Sarai. If you are interested in this novel-sized story of debauchery, follow my website for updates.
Larry Archer writes HEA stories about swingers, voyeurs, cuckolds, and Hotwives. The stories always include explicit sex for men and women on every page.
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I think it really depends how this is brought up and pictured in the book. I hate feeling like an object at the moment, unless it’s of desire, and even that… I’m not so sure any more.
But if it is a way for Samantha to satisfy her fantasies… I don’t know. I mean, it’s no worse than the stories of women being raped, and I know a good few female friends/writers for whom it is a fantasy and a definite turn on.
Now, as from a promotional point of view… I have no clue! 😀
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Thanks Dawn for your comments and I am definitely not picturing her as being forced and/or coerced in any fashion. In the story, she fantasizes about being in a gangbang and this gives her the outlet to experience those desires. My wife is a dyed-in-the-wool women’s libber and so I’m well aware of how to respect and treat women. However, after having said that, Iknow a number of women who get off on that fantasy. Not in actuality but in the imagination of it.
And naturally, these are fictional characters in a fictional story and I’m not trying to promote anyone to do this.
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Part of what bugged me about this was that it was Foxy who offered to sell Samantha. If Samantha sold *herself* that would be a different situation. This all of a sudden puts the story into non-con territory, which is definitely not typical of your work. (Not that I don’t agree that non-con can be hot when done well.)
I think you could allay any objections by having Foxy and Samantha confer about this first. Foxy could laughingly suggest that she’d act as Sam’s “agent”. Sam might be too shy to do the deal herself, but be glad to have Foxy negotiate.
BTW watch out that you don’t stereotype the Germans to the point that you piss off some of your readers. In fact it’s unlikely someone involved with the Goo Girls site would not speak good English.
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Foxy didn’t offer to sell Samantha, only responded to an offer. Not much difference I’ll grant you but a difference. I might even change it up to them asking Sam directly. While I agree that it is likely Germans can speak English well, I needed to have them confuse “Sell” with “Contract” because what they really want is to hire Samantha to work for them.
Foxy would never sell someone but would probably consider it a great joke at the time. For her ownership (subjection) of a woman goes against her core beliefs but as part of a fantasy would be right up her alley. Foxy lives for role play and loves being a Mistress.
Since from the get-go, Sam seemed to be infatuated with group sex and you can’t get much more extreme than the typical German Goo Girls movies. Actually, they are not as extreme as some of the offshoots that have cropped up such as LauraTeen.com et. al., which take it to a higher level.
Starting with bukkake and the typical Japanese girl being forced to put up with the abuse, to Goo Girls who love it. I find it amazing how the culture of two countries makes the same act completely different.
While gangbangs/pulling trains are okay, they really don’t float my boat. Too many cocks and not enough holes. LOL While I appreciate the fact that being used is a fantasy for some women and I have no problems doing it to enhance her pleasure, I wouldn’t normally get involved beyond as a spectator. A friend of mine and I like to double-team some woman and that’s a lot better in my mind than twenty guys piling on. For swingers, sex is not a problem and you find yourself being more selective, which I realize is an alien concept for most men.
Sam wouldn’t be too shy at this point as she’s gone pretty far down the rabbit hole by this part of the story.
As always, you’ve given me a lot to think about. Thanks
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“For swingers, sex is not a problem and you find yourself being more selective, which I realize is an alien concept for most men.”
This is a really insightful comment, Larry.
And I agree, if you’re talking about real, fun sex (as opposed to abuse and rape), I think women probably get off more on the gang-bangs than men. Or at least on the fantasy. For women it’s not just the thrill of being viewed as a sexual object, of being used, but also being the center of attention!
(Not that I’ve ever actually been involved in a gang bang. Orgies, yes, but gang bangs, no.)
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Sex for women is more mental than physical. At least that’s how I understand it and IMHO women start to be more like men as they mature. I believe that this is why mature women (being PC here) are often more sexually aggressive than younger women.
But you’re 100% correct, a man or physically stronger person should never exert their will over another woman/person. Abuse and Rape during play acting are exciting but never in real life. Spanking is a common enjoyment among women, more than men from what I’ve seen and just another kink that some of us enjoy!
Being tied up and/or restrained is another one that women often enjoy. I think in part this is due to the fact that women are always taught to be nice girls and men are always regaled by the conquests they have. By restraining someone, they are not responsible for what they do and don’t have any guilt about their actions. So it’s a case of I couldn’t stop them from taking me and it wasn’t my fault as I’m a nice girl and nice girls don’t do things like that. Forget the fact that the whole time I’m screaming more, more, more! Religion has managed to screw up so many peoples thinking about sex and how dirty it is.
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